The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity

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The provided picture illustrates the procedure of electricity production using a certain type of coal.

Furthermore

, there are 8 key steps commencing with the coal extraction and ending with the distribution of the given source.

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, it has been provided that there are several similarities

occurred

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in the production stages. Turning to the preparation, it can be seen that after mining as the first step, raw materials are

then

crushed into powder form before being transported to the gasifier usually by trucks. At

this

stage, heat is applied in order to turn powder

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gas. Moving onto the remaining steps, after the heating process, coal in

form

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the form

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of gas is

then

cooled releasing heated waste and useful materials which are cleaned to remove impurities and transferred to the gas power plant where heated waste is once again released.

Following

this

step, electricity is produced in

this

plant and distributed for residential uses

as well as

industrial purposes.

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