the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
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The given maps illustrate the difference between the past 20 years and now in the central library.
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, it has been decorated in some detail. Turning to more details, it can be seen that tables and chairs have been exchanged with sofas that
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have been relocated, in the past they were in the
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of the library but now they are at the top of the left side which is used for children's fiction books and storytelling event
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in the past was for computer games and
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it has been expanded as well.
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, the current library has established a cafe in turn of an inquiry desk at the right bottom
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, the shape of the location is different, the children's book
room
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has been converted into a lecture
room
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. The computer
room
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is new and has been restructured from the reading
room
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and the entrance has been relocated too. At least, some new facilities have been constructed
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as self-service machines and information desks that were not there before.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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