the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The given maps illustrate the difference between the past 20 years and now in the central library.

Overall

, it has been decorated in some detail. Turning to more details, it can be seen that tables and chairs have been exchanged with sofas that

also

have been relocated, in the past they were in the

center

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centre

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of the library but now they are at the top of the left side which is used for children's fiction books and storytelling event

however

in the past was for computer games and

also

it has been expanded as well.

Furthermore

, the current library has established a cafe in turn of an inquiry desk at the right bottom

moreover

, the shape of the location is different, the children's book

room

has been converted into a lecture

room

. The computer

room

is new and has been restructured from the reading

room

and the entrance has been relocated too. At least, some new facilities have been constructed

such

as self-service machines and information desks that were not there before.

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