The pie chart show what makes people most happy for two different age groups. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are
two
pie charts that demonstrate comparison
of the events that make people most happy, in Add an article
a comparison
two
groups
- under 30 and over 30. For best
understanding of Add an article
the best
factors
that make people happy it would be convenient to divide them to
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into
two
groups
.
The first one includes the same factors
like achievement at work, doing hobbies and other factors
. In this
group
we can see almost the same percentage at the same parts of Add a comma
group,
pie
. Achievement at work - 31% and 32% respectively; doing hobbies - 22% and 24% respectively. There is another sector that Add an article
the pie
called
"other Add a missing verb
is called
factors
" and it takes 14% and 10% respectively.
In the second group
we can see the difference between Add a comma
group,
two
age Correct article usage
the two
groups
. For young people one of the paramount parts of their lives is a good appearance (with 18%), and for elder
age Correct your spelling
older
groups
financial security takes the same place with 20%. The last
part of chart
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the chart
are
travelling in the youngest Change the verb form
is
group
with 15%, and being with family in the elderly group
with 14%.Submitted by anastasia on
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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