The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the maps illustrate the development of the

garden

park

in 1920 and now.

it is clear that

there have been several changes mainly in the

center

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centre

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of the

garden

over the given period and

also

there is no alteration in some parts of

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the grance

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grance

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France

park

such

as

the

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apply

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both entrances and the rose

garden

on the north side of the

park

. it is

also

worth mentioning that

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the

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glass door has been replaced by

water

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a water

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feature on the

south west

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southwest

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of the

park

. the elimination of the pond which was used for watering the plants is one of the significant changes.

moreover

, they built

new

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a new

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childern

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children

children's

playground in

this

part of the

park

. next to the

playground

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playground,

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there is a cafe

instead

of the

pervious

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previous

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rose

garden

.

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Furthermore

furthermore

, the number of

rose

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the rose

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garden

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gardens

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has been reduced . in

further

detail, several seats have been added to the

park

for more convenience .

also

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also,

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the new rose

garden

has been erected in the

center

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centre

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of

park

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the park

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,

where

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which

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is

surronded

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surrounded

by many seats. the rose

garden

was

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apply

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used to be a fountain.

in addition

, the

improvment

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improvement

of

stage

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the stage

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and made into the

ampitheatre

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amphitheatre

is a considerable difference in these maps.