More and more people use private motorbikes or cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The majority of
people
prefer to use
their own motorbikes or cars
instead
of public transportation
. However
, there are a lot of reasons for this
trend. I will explain the duty of governments to encourage people
to use
public vehicles and give my own idea about this
issue
with some examples in further
paragraphs.
To begin with, it is clear that there are many reasons to use
private vehicles instead
of public transportation
such
as buses, trains and subways. nowadays, because of modern lives, people
have to multi-task as well as
possible. Hence
, they are forced to move fast and public transportation
has delays sometimes. On the other hand
, they can not be free in public places. For instance
, almost most people
like to listen to their favourite music or stop whenever they want in the middle of the way. Moreover
, some people
lose their bags on public transport since these places are so crowded. Thus
, they do not take the risk of using public cars
.
In my opinion, governments should provide more facilities for their own citizens to use
public vehicles such
as fast public transportation
, enough oxygen and good quality for people
's health and advanced cars
. It is my notion that to encourage people
, related organizations should increase the tax on private cars
. they must decrease the cost of public transportation
also
. As a consequence
, most families prefer to use
public transport because it is economical.
Furthermore
, this
issue
helps to economic cycle in the world as well as
the economy family. I should refer to less pollution in the nvironment
. Correct your spelling
environment
In other words
, if people
use
public transportation
, pollution of the air will be less. So, we can warranty health in society more. Additionally
, pollution affects plants and flowersRephrase
apply
also
. It is undeniable that this
issue
can destroy the ecosystem too.
To sum up
, although
I am addicted to driving, I agree to use
public transportation
due to
its benefits. To be honest, I think all of us are responsible for the environment and our society. According to
my knowledge, first of all, governments should to conscious about using public cars
to people
. Then
, people
think and decide about this
important issue
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task achievement
The essay does a good job of discussing the reasons for the increased use of private vehicles and offers solutions for promoting public transportation use. However, try to provide more specific and detailed examples to strengthen your argument. You could mention specific cities or countries that have successfully implemented measures to encourage public transport use.
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There is a logical structure in your essay, but the flow could be improved. Ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next. For example, the paragraph beginning with 'In my opinion, governments should provide more facilities...' could be connected better to the preceding one with a transitional phrase.
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