The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram and table provided helpfully lay out the percentage of
tourists
that Use synonyms
stays
within the resort based on their region of origin. Each origin Correct subject-verb agreement
stay
have
different traits Change the verb form
has
such
as average length of stay, most popular Linking Words
accomodation
, and their main activities. Let us start by examining the pie chart.
As we can see, the chart is divided into 4 portions, which are Asia, Europe, Correct your spelling
accommodation
US
, and other countries. Correct article usage
the US
Firstly
, Linking Words
the
most people that stay within Correct article usage
apply
this
establishment Linking Words
originates
from Asia, taking up to 37%. Correct subject-verb agreement
originate
Then
, the second most common origin is Europe, just a little shorter than the previous region, which is 35% Linking Words
from
the Change preposition
of
overall
Linking Words
Use synonyms
tourists
. Correct quantifier usage
number of tourists
Then
, the third one is Linking Words
US
and the Correct article usage
the US
last
one is people Linking Words
that
Correct pronoun usage
who
comes
from various origins.
Moving on to the Change the verb form
come
next,
we can see from the table that European Linking Words
tourists
often stay the longest, averaging Use synonyms
on
16 days. Change preposition
apply
While
, Asian Linking Words
tourists
tend to stay the shortest, usually around 7 days. Use synonyms
However
, during their vacation, Asians often stay at the 5-star hotel. Linking Words
Although
the establishment Linking Words
have
5 and 4-star hotels, camping and Change the verb form
has
caravan
have Fix the agreement mistake
caravans
also
become a popular choice of Linking Words
accomodation
by European and other Correct your spelling
accommodation
tourists
which comes from different regions. Use synonyms
Lastly
, each tourist groups have various main activities. Asian and US Linking Words
tourists
often come for sightseeing. Use synonyms
Then
the Europeans mainly Linking Words
swims
and Change the verb form
swim
sunbathes
, Correct subject-verb agreement
sunbathe
while
the Linking Words
tourists
from other regions Use synonyms
favors
surfing.
In conclusion, the chart and table Change the verb form
favor
describes
the tourist groups that Change the verb form
describe
stays
within a holiday resort, along Change the verb form
stay
each
of their characteristics.Change preposition
with each
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stays" was used 7 times.
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