The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

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The three pie charts illustrate the methods of dealing

dangerous

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waste products in

Korea

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Sweden

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and

United

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the United

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Kingdom.

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, underground is regarded as the

parimary

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primary

way to handle perilous waste products in the

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while

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the most popular measure in

korean

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Korean

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recyling

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recycling

. Meanwhile,

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the UK

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has extra means of handling those products than other countries. As is shown in the charts, 82% of dangerous wastage is tackled by

burrying

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burying

them

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apply

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underground in

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the UK

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, which is the highest one among the three countries, followed by

Sweden

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with 55%,

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that figure for

Korea

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only

take

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up to 22%.

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, a vast majority of risk rubbish

are

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solved by

recyling

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recycling

Korea

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(69%),

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that figure for

Sweden

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is lower at 25%.

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Similarily

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, incineration accounts for the smallest portion of handling wastage in all three countries, with 2% in the

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, 20% in

the

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apply

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Sweden

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and 9% in

the

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apply

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Korea

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respectively.

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the UK

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has two methods to figure out perilous rubbish. Specifically, they are chemical treatment and dumping at sea, and the proportions of them are

same

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the same

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at 8%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words korea, sweden, uk with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

178 words

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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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