The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site.
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The maps illustrate how the town of Norbiton looks now and the future plans for its development. Today, the Norbiton industrial zone is located south of the
river
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,
while
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there is farmland to the north. The entry to the area is from the main
road
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, which leads to the roundabout and inner
road
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. There are factory buildings on both sides of the inner
road
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and the roundabout. In future, the central ring
road
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and the inner
road
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will remain the same,
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, the rest infrastructure will be changed.
First,
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all factory buildings will be demolished and
instead
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, housing, shops, medical centres and a school will be built.
Second,
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the entrance from the main
road
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will be through a small ring
road
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, which will be connected to the central one, to which two additional inner roads will be added. One will lead to the northwest neighbourhood, and another one to the north district, across the
river
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over the bridge and
then
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split. In the east, between the inner
road
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and the
river
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, a new playground will be established.
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, the industrial area will be replaced by a suburb with amenities. Some farming land will be replaced by housing, and the district will extend beyond the
river
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, connected by the bridge.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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