The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. at least 150 words.

The line chart displays

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the

number

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of overseas

visitors

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to three different

areas

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in a European country from 1987 to 2007. The line chart

displays

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shows

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that the

number

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of overseas

visitors

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to the

coast

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coastal

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areas

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slowly decreased from 1987 to 1992

about

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by about

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40

thousand

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.

Then

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it kept an upward trend fast to about 75

thousand

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in 2017.

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,

date

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data

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shows

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that the

number

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of mountain

visitors

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has never declined since 1987, which is about 35

thousand

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.

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, the

number

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of tourists in the lakes area rapidly rose from 10

thousand

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in 1987 to 75

thousand

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in 2002, and the

he

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number

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of tourists in the lakes area rapidly declined between 75

thousand

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in 2002 and 50

thousand

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in 2007. In summary , the data display that the

number

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of

visitors

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in the three different

areas

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has Increased in several years.

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, compared with the other two

areas

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of the country, the

number

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of

visitors

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in

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to

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the lake kept

downward

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a downward

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trend fast in 2002.