The tables below shows the reason for travel and the main issues for the travelling public.

The tables below shows the reason for travel and the main issues for the travelling public.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The tables below shows the reason for travel and the main issues for the travelling public.
The tables provide information on different purposes why people go on a journey and the major hurdles they encounter.
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, travelling to work and visiting friends and family are the two main reasons for embarking on trips meanwhile safety and highway traffic are great concerns to members of the public whenever they travel. On Table 1, youth in ages 10 and 20
years
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are the most traveller to friends and family and
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to recreation and social gathering which are 40% and 35% respectively, meanwhile, 15% of them
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travel for personal
reason.
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reasons
15% of young adult travel for shopping,
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, 78% of adult between
age
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31and 40
years
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make a trip to go to and from work. In Table 2, only adults were considered between
age
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21 and 75
years
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. 30% of people between ages 21 and 35
years
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consider transport fare as a primary
concern
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meanwhile 13% of them see access to public transport as
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an issue, and 67% of the elderly (
age
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51 to 75
years
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) confirm safety to be their major worries, even though
that is
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also
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a major
concern
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for those between the
age
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of 36 and 50
years
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, highway congestion is the second on their list of
concern
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which is 21% and 15% of them see aggressive drivers as a
concern
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, age, concern with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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