The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate the amount of money earned from
coffee
and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in various European nations.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in both
goods between two
years, except Correct article usage
the two
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figure for bananas in Sweden and in Denmark. The Change preposition
for the
UK
gained the most budget in both
coffee
and bananas compared to other countries.
According to
the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee
, Switzerland earned 3 millions
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million
of
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euros
from selling this
in 1999, followed by 1.8 and 1.5 million
euros
in Denmark and in
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UK
respectively. The lowest figure belonged to both
Belgium and Sweden in
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this
year, accounting for lower
than 1 Correct word choice
less
million
euros
. However
, after 5 years, the UK
dominated the most money gained from selling coffee
, with the figure increasing 14 times, from 1.5 billion euros
in the previous year to 20 billion euros
in 2004. The other data climbed to around 1 to 6 billions
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billion
of
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euros
.
Regarding bananas’ sales, the figures for the UK
were the highest in both
2 years, recording 15 millions
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million
of
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euros
in 1999 and treble to 47 million
euros
in 2004. Switzerland and Belgium experienced a dramatic increase, to 5.5 and 4 millions
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million
of
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euros
in 2004 respectively. Conversely
, Sweden and Denmark declined to less than 1 million
euros
over the period.Submitted by weezel on
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