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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart illustrates the numeral of expenditures of the two nations on client goods in 2010.
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, the horizontal axis shows the number of costume interests. it has five categories: cars, computers, readers, perfume and cameras. In accordance with the shows of the two nations and: France and the UK.
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, the digit of consumers who are interests
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 some classifications varied considerably
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 some categories of shopper interests
trend
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 with the highest rate The highest grade of payment for UK customers' goods in the car was just under 450 000 £
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 the meagrest grade of
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 expenditure of UK buyer goods in perfume was just under 150000 £ and for France customer expenditure
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 of the tallest grade of the car
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 400000 £
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 the lowest level of the
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 of expenditure cameras were under 150000 £

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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