The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given table describes the tunnel subway networks in six urban areas.

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, the route’s length and passenger volume decreased over time.

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, I will describe the subway system before 1950.

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, I will explore the network after the following year. The first lower-level

railway

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network was built in 1863 in London and had the longest length about 394 kilometres. Later, in 1900, The subway was built in Paris which had the second-highest length. The busiest

railway

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was opened in Tokyo in 1927, serving 1927 million people annually. The first

railway

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operated after 1950 was in Washington DC and had a comparable distance from the previous

railway

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, 5 years later, a metro rail line system that was operated in Kyoto had a range of only 11

kilometers

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and amount of citizens served was 45 million yearly. The newer metro rail line system in 2021 in Los Angeles had better usage and distances than that.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

155 words

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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

In the modern world, many employees lack soft skill such as communication and working in the teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills ?

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Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?