The diagram below illustrates the production process by which sugar is made from the sugar cane.

The diagram below illustrates the production process by which sugar is made from the sugar cane.
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The diagram below illustrates the production process by which
sugar
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is made from the
sugar
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cane.
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, growing
sugar
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cane is the crucial step in making the
sugar
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, culminating with the ready product. In the first 12–18 months, the
sugar
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canes are grown and made into a weedy sort of plant.
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, the cane is yielded, by the farmer crushing it with the tractor, with excessive pressure. The juice is later extracted and sent to the factory, where the workers purify the juice with limestone water. After having been sterilized, it is evaporated with heat, and the juice becomes a sticky prodigy
that is
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called syrup. Over the next stage,
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it is still hot, it is centrifuged, separating
sugar
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crystals from the syrup, and sent into the drying and cooling bin, where one waits for a certain time. As soon as
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it has waited for enough time to cool down, it can be enjoyed by the consumers,
according to
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their tastes and preferences.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultivation
  • Harvesting
  • Crushing
  • Purification
  • Evaporation
  • Crystallization
  • Centrifugation
  • Molasses
  • Tropical regions
  • Subtropical regions
  • Extraction
  • Impurities
  • Concentration
  • Seed crystals
  • Vacuum boiling
  • Distribution
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