The popularity of electric vehicles is rising. Explore the benefits and drawbacks of widespread electric vehicle adoption and discuss potential challenges in transitioning from traditional to electric transportation.

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Nowadays, more and more people are switching from traditional
transportation
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to electric
vehicles
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.
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issue is believed to bring some positive and negative effects and some challenges can appear in the transition process, which I will explain here. One major benefit
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using electric
vehicles
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is
time
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efficiency in travel. It is because many activities whose locations are so far
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a long
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but using electric
vehicles
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can shorten our trips quickly.
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, people who want to go anywhere can travel without considering mileage.
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, the drawback
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electric
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is that not everyone has the same social economy to buy it. As we know, the price of
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this
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vehicles
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are
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so expensive.
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, people who are
low income
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can not have it.
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, electric
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cars
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just can be bought by rich families
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a bike can be had by everyone.
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,
some
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challenge is that
areas
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for rechargeable batteries
is
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not available in some
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. It is because there are many
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which did not have current
source
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will get
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into trobles
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trobles
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during
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transition
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,
government
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the government
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must add the budget to building
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this facilities
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these facilities
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, building electric
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in every area which has electric
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.
Furthermore
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, machine
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cause
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damage environment because of a rise in air pollution. It becomes
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increase in global temperature and
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lead
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to the possibility of extreme weather in an area. In conclusion, the positive effect
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electric
transportation
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is efficient
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while
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the drawback is the high of cost
in
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purchasing.
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, the challenge for
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transition is
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for rechargeable batteries
is
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not available including rising
the
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air pollution.
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