The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The graph illustrates the number of units of

electricity

used during the typical day in England in winter and summer,

while

the pie chart shows a split in

electricity

usage between the four different categories.

First,

during the typical summer day, the number of units is around 15-17 thousand units with two peaks, around 14.00 and 23.00.

Second,

in the winter, the demand fluctuates more

,

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and has

drop

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a drop

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of 30000 at 7 am,

peak

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of 45000 at 10 pm and another one of 40000 at 3 am.

Finally

, in England, in the average home, 52.5% accounted for heating. Both lighting, TV, radio category and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electronic tools

category

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accounted for 15% each,

while

ovens, kettles,

washing

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and washing

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machines

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17.5%

Overall

, in England, during the typical day, the demand for

electricity

in winter is twice as high as in summer, and more than half of the total

electricity

used

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is used

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for heating rooms and water,

while

the rest of the energy is split between the three other categories almost equally.