The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the
sum
of visitors that visited a Caribbean island
from 2010 to 2017. Units are measured by millions of tourists. Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the number
of tourists both staying on cruise
ships and on the island
increased throughout the given period.
In terms of the figure of the folk that room on cruise
boats stood at around 0,25 in 2010. Although
in the coming year it had a slight increase, in 2012 the statistic was back again like at the beginning. In 2013, the sum
of foreigner
that stayed on Fix the agreement mistake
foreigners
cruise
ships increased slightly at exactly 0,5, before reaching a peak at 2 in 2017.
The total number
of tourists that staying
on the Wrong verb form
stayed
island
stood at just over 0,5 in the first year. Even though the sum
of visitors who roomed on the island
was stuck in 2011, it witnessed a moderate climb to around 1,25 in 2012. Furthermore
, the sum
of people who stayed on the island
peaked at 1,5 in the following three years. Although
it had a slight drop in 2016, the number
was back at a peak in 2017. So, the total number
of visitors both staying on cruise
ships and islands peaked at 3,5 in the last
period.Submitted by alfathemaster on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sum, island, number, cruise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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