The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it look now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the changing floor plan of the public library 20 years ago and at present. In general, what stands out from the maps is that it has become more developed and modern.
Firstly
, one of the changes is that on the north-east of the library which used to be children’s books, however
, it was replaced with a lecture room, and on the right of the entrance which was an enquiry desk which contains tickets and book returns, then
, it was demolished and a café was built. Moreover
, on the east side of the map which used to be an adult non-fiction publication, it was replaced with adult fiction books and an information desk as well as
self-service machines in order to serve people.
In addition
, in the middle of the archives tables and chairs were constructed which used to be an empty area. next,
on the north-west of the archive which was CDs and videos as well as
computer games were removed and two sofas and storytelling events as well as
a children’s fiction book have been built and the space of it has become larger. Moreover
, on the west side of the entrance which was the reading place, it has been replaced with a computer area. Finally
, the above computer room which used to be an adult fiction book was replaced with all reference publications.Submitted by hoseinyasemi.ir on
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