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The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below illustrates the
sales
 of different
music
 formats from 1994 to 2006. To commence with ,
Overall
, it is clearly seen that
music
sales
 of
CDs
 and
Cassettes
 reduced
while
 that of digital
music
 increased ,
In addition
 , digital
music
 became the most popular
music
 format in 2006 . In 1994,
CDs
sales
 number started at roughly 450
million
 before peaking at 800
million
 in 2000
In contrast
 , in the same
period
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 the figures for
cassettes
also
 started at 400
million
then
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and then
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 hit nearly 100
million
 . The number of digital
music
 remained constant at around 5
million
 . From 2000 to 2006,
CDs
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sales
 volume experienced a slump from its peak to only 300
million
 .
Similarly
 , there was a gradual decline from 100
million
 to nearly 5
million
 in
Cassettes
sales
 volume.
However
, the figures for digital
music
 showed a slight climb from around 5
million
 to 10
million
 before overtook that of
cassettes
 in 2002 and that of
CDs
 in 2004. By 2006, digital
music
 had reached a peak of 750
million
 units sold, which made it become the most preferred
music
 format.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, music, cds, cassettes, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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