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The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below illustrates the
sales
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 of different
music
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 formats from 1994 to 2006. To commence with ,
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, it is clearly seen that
music
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sales
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 of
CDs
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 and
Cassettes
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 reduced
while
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 that of digital
music
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 increased ,
In addition
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 , digital
music
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 became the most popular
music
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 format in 2006 . In 1994,
CDs
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sales
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 number started at roughly 450
million
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 before peaking at 800
million
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 in 2000
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 , in the same
period
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period,
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 the figures for
cassettes
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also
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 started at 400
million
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then
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and then
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 hit nearly 100
million
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 . The number of digital
music
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 remained constant at around 5
million
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 . From 2000 to 2006,
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CDs
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CD
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sales
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 volume experienced a slump from its peak to only 300
million
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 .
Similarly
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million
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 to nearly 5
million
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 in
Cassettes
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sales
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 volume.
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, the figures for digital
music
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 showed a slight climb from around 5
million
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 to 10
million
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 before overtook that of
cassettes
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 in 2002 and that of
CDs
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 in 2004. By 2006, digital
music
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 had reached a peak of 750
million
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 units sold, which made it become the most preferred
music
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 format.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, music, cds, cassettes, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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