The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries.

The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of out-of-job residents aged 15 to 24 in five different European nations, compared with the
overall
rate of workless people in those countries. In general, almost the number of laid-off inhabitants between the ages of 15 and 24 accounted for a higher rate than the
overall
. Poland's proportion was the highest
while
Denmark had the lowest of both
overall
and unemployed young people. Having looked at the given picture for more detail, Poland witnessed many unoccupied people at young ages, more than nearly 2.5 times the total population. Meanwhile, Italy and Hungary had the same trend of high unemployment among young individuals, at 23% and 16%, respectively,
while
the rate of the total laid-off population was around 6% to 8%. Germany shows a low number of individuals who didn't have a job under 15%, more than the
overall
by 5%. Related to Denmark which country had the lowest at both rates
.
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The total Inhabitants who were unemployed accounted for approximately 3%, lower than young by 10%.
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