The diagram below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location .summerise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures and make comparisons where relevent.

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The chart presents the visualization of

wave

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energy vehicles and how it is located. Illustrations describe alternative terms for generating electricity with 0 emissions of carbon and

absence

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the absence

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of damage to the environment.

This

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is a natural and repetitive process.

Overall

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, there are two types of machines, two resources, 5 steps and 2 equipment in

wave

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energy manufacturing. Obviously, they are machinery for small and large waves, a generator, a turbine,

wave

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and airflow.

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, the process of producing electricity starts with a

wave

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coming into the down chamber,

then

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the upcoming flow makes the turbine move,

although

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while

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going out the up chamber it accelerates the turbine. The same procedure goes from another direction. The device provides the generator to produce electrical power. Meanwhile, there are high installation and low installation costs machines. They are used for low and high output. Respectively, devices are charged by small and large waves. The first one is located not far from a coastline,

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, the second one is stayed

further

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wave with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 6 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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