The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia
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The bar chart displays the
percentage
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of four different income categories in
cities
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and regional centres of Australia.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the Lower
middle
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and
middle
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groups are the highest,
while
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the lowest groups are high and low-income in both
cities
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and regional centres.
According to
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what is shown, the proportion of the low-income
category
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is around 13 per
cent
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and it is the smallest
percentage
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in
cities
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. The
middle
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income group has the highest
percentage
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in
cities
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, it makes up 35 per
cent
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of all proportions. Below a third is the lower
middle
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group and a fifth is the high
category
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.
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, in regional centres, the high
category
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is the lowest
while
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the lower
middle
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is the largest, it forms about over a third. The
percentage
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of the low group is approximately 22 per
cent
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and the
middle
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category
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is above 25 per
cent
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, cities, middle, category, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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