Topic: The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The supplied
map
illustrates how many changes have occurred in Ryemouth village
among
1995 and Change preposition
between
present
.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
; a number of dramatic developments take place which alter the layout of the village
completely within the period.
It is clearly shown that the north
part of the Replace the word
northern
village
undergoes
significant changes. Both farmland and forest park are replaced by the golf and tennis court in the Wrong verb form
is undergoing
north east
of the Correct your spelling
northeast
map
. Furthermore
, housing in the north west
of the Ryemouth Correct your spelling
northwest
are
extended.
Change the verb form
is
According to
the maps, the south of the village
has some tangible transformation. While
the hotel in the south east
of the Correct your spelling
southeast
map
remains flat, the car park is established next to it. In addition
, the shops are replaced by restaurant
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
in
the left side of the hotel. Change preposition
on
Although
the café remains in the same location, the shops are knock
down to make way for the restaurant in the Wrong verb form
knocked
south west
of the Correct your spelling
southwest
village
. Finally
, the fish market which were
in front of the shops Change the verb form
was
are
converted Wrong verb form
was
to
Change preposition
into
the
apartments, and the fishing port in the south of the Correct article usage
apply
map
are
demolished.Wrong verb form
was
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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