Topic: The map below shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present.
The supplied
map
illustrates a plethora of changes have
occurred in Rye Correct pronoun usage
that have
mouth
Capitalize word
Mouth
village
between 1995 and present
.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
; a number of dramatic developments take place which alter the layout of the village
completely within the period.
It is clearly shown that the northern part of the village
undergoes
significant changes. Both farmland and forest park are replaced by the golf and tennis court in the northeast of the Wrong verb form
is undergoing
map
. Furthermore
, housing in the northwest of the Rye mouth is extended.
According to
the maps, the south of the village
has a number of tangible transformations. While
the hotel in the southeast of the map
remains flat, the car park is established next to it. In addition
, the shops are replaced by restaurants in
the left side of the hotel. Change preposition
on
Although
the café remains in the same location, the shops are knock
down to make way for the restaurant in the southwest of the Wrong verb form
knocked
village
. Finally
, the fish market which were
in front of the shops Change the verb form
was
are
converted into Wrong verb form
was
the
apartments, and the fishing port in the south of the Correct article usage
apply
map
was demolished.Submitted by abhari1997 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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