The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The fist chart shows the reasons why adult decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information show below.
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The chart illustrates the adult survey of
education
. The first bar chart describes reason
for adult Add an article
the reason
education
and there are seven reasons behind this
. The second chart shows how they pay their
Change preposition
for their
education's
Change noun form
education
cost
.
Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Overall
, it is clear that
interest in subject
is the main Add an article
the subject
a subject
reason
for studying and the majority of learners pay their education
fees by themselves.
In detail, two-fifths of adults
Change noun form
adults'
adult's
reason
for staying is interest in subject
and to gain qualification is the second Add an article
the subject
popular
cause for Correct quantifier usage
most popular
education
at 38. Helpful for their current job is only for 22 but to improve prospects of promotion and enjoy learning have the same amount of reason
, which is accounted for a fifth. To able
to change Add a missing verb
be able
job
and to meet people are the least causes for Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
education
, which is
12 and 9 respectively.
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Furthermore
, the majority of the learners pay their course cost by themselves than tax payer
, which is accounted for two-fifths and a quarter respectively. Employer share adult's Correct your spelling
taxpayer
education
fees is
just above
a quarter.Change the verb form
are
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, reason with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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