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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
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The line graph depicts the population percentage aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in
Japan
,
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Sweden
, and
USA
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the USA
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.
Overall
, The rate of population of
USA
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the USA
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 began as the leading one compared to
Japan
 but
at
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in
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 the end reversal
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happened
.The
Swedan
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Swedish
 volume started in the middle between the other two countries
except
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 two centuries before remained essentially the same throughout the periods. Figure showing the least population in
the
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Japan
 was about 5% and the leading one in the
USA
 was 9% in 1940. Afterwards,
USA
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the USA
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 displayed
consistent
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a consistent
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 increase
upto
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up to
 15% until 1980 and
then
 steadily maintained before
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roseup
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rose up
(23%) from 2020 to 2024.
In contrast
,
Japan
shown
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showed
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 hover changes till 2000 and significantly
increased
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doubled the count
10
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by 10
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% in 2030 by
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 the
USA
 which
then
 suddenly
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soared
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upto
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up to
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 28% in 2040 by overcoming the two countries
reached
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 the leading position.
Swedan
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Sweden
 volume rate gradually increased from 7% to 20% between 1940 to 2010
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exceeding the
USA
 in 1990.
Then
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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 (2040)
further
 increased
upto
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up to
 26% with a small dip(18%) in 2030.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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