The table above shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the information and making comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the percentage of people using
phones
for different purposes in 2006, 2008 and 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, making calls had been the most common way of using Linking Words
phones
throughout the examined periods. Use synonyms
While
the use of Linking Words
phones
for calls declined slightly, people seemed to start using Use synonyms
phones
to search the Internet and record videos and rely on them for other reasons as well.
Starting with the dominant ways of using mobiles, making calls was the most significant in all three periods of time. Use synonyms
While
there was a minor drop in 2010, everyone used Linking Words
phones
for calls in 2006 and 2008. Use synonyms
Secondly
, sending and receiving text messages was another important way with the gradual increase with all the figures accounting for over 70%. Linking Words
Similarly
, taking Linking Words
phones
and searching the Internet were Use synonyms
also
becoming more popular as they were both slightly behind in exchanging text messages. Indeed, there was no data available regarding the use of the Internet in 2006.
Turning to the categories with minor uses, playing games shared less than half Linking Words
whereas
it experienced a huge increase from 2006 to 2008 with 17% and 42% respectively. Even though playing music remained comparatively lower, it jumped from 12% in 2006 to 26% in 2010. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there was no use of Linking Words
phones
as a way to record videos in 2006 but its popularity suddenly rose from 9% in 2008 to 35% in 2010.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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