You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services. Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the result of a survey conducted by a university about satisfaction with IT support and opening
hours
targeted at full-time and part-time students
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the two student groups
have different opinions on IT support, while
the current beginning hours
have similar opinions.
Firstly
, while
the part-time students
aren't satisfied with IT support, more than half of the full-time students
stated that they were very satisfied with this
service. In contrast
, the part-time students
responded 'Not at all' at 45%, which is the reverse consequence between them. The percentage of students
in both groups
was recorded roughly the same at 32% and 35%, respectively.
On the other hand
, two different groups
showed a similar tendency in a question about current opening hours
. The two groups
expressed satisfaction at 67% and 72%, respectively. Only 1% full-time
Change preposition
of full-time
students
stated dissatisfaction with the opening hours
, while
the part-time students
stated slightly greater, at 5%.Submitted by kopopig on
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