The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
line
graph
shows a variation of a
Correct article usage
the
number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
museum
visitor
, including Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
Louvre
, Vatican, Shenzen, and Correct article usage
the Louvre
London
Science
Museum
from 1980 up to 2015.
First,
Louvre
had the Correct article usage
the Louvre
most
highest Change the adjective
apply
number
of Visitor
around 8. Fix the agreement mistake
Visitors
it
Capitalize word
It
also
had a huge increasment
after 15 years Correct your spelling
increase
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
reached
around 9 on the Wrong verb form
reaching
line
graph
. Beside
, it Replace the word
Besides
also
have
a little Change the verb form
has
decreasment
around 8,2 5 years after the Correct your spelling
decrease
increasment
. Correct your spelling
increase
increased
Louvre
museum
had rise
an increase on the Change the verb form
risen
line
graph
15 years after that reched
around 8,9. Correct your spelling
reached
In contrast
, London
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the London
Science
museum
experienced a Capitalize word
Museum
fluantiol
and Correct your spelling
flaunting
manufactoring
Correct your spelling
manufacturing
to
decline. Fix the infinitive
apply
London
Science
Museum
gained a 4 in the number
of the line
graph
in 1980. In 2015, London
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the London
Science
museum
had a Capitalize word
Museum
hilariaus
drop to 2, which made Correct your spelling
hilarious
this
museum
had
the lowest Wrong verb form
have
number
of visitor
compared with three other Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
museum
.
Change to a plural noun
museums
Secondly
, Correct your spelling
Vatican
Vaticant
Correct article usage
the Vaticant
museum
had Capitalize word
Museum
dominate
the Change the verb form
dominated
number
of visitor
beside Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
Correct article usage
the louvre
louvre
Capitalize word
Louvre
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, graph, number, museum, visitor, louvre, london, science with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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