The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table compares data about the percentage of clients who spent money in three various categories in five

several

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countries(

Ireland

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, Italy,

Spain

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Sweden

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, and

Turkey

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) in 2002.

Overall

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, food, drink, and Tobacco were popular items

specially

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Turkey

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, yet leisure and education had the lowest percentage, particularly in

Spain

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According to

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the food, drink, and Tobacco,that was the main reason that people bought it in 2002, and had a yawning gap with other items.

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Turkey

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was the first country by 32.14 per

cent

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then

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Ireland

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Spain

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, Italy, and

Sweden

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respectively. In fact, Italy and

Sweden

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roughly had the same percentage nearly 16 per

cent

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. The other categories show

, Clothing

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that clothing

and footwear had the second level, and

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these things were really important for Italians by 9 percent. After that,

Ireland

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, Italy,

Spain

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, and

Turkey

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had the same figures nearly 6.5 per

cent

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, but for

Sweden

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, inhabitants were not crucial things so that had 5.4 per

cent

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. For, leisure and education

Turkey

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like food, drink, and Tobacco had the best section by 4.35 per

cent

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then

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Italy equally to

Sweden

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with 3.2 per

cent

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finally

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were

Ireland

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and

Spain

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respectively.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, spain, sweden, turkey, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

192 words

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