The diagram above shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture describes the
process
of producing chocolate
.
Overall
, the process
comprises ten steps, beginning with the growing of the cacao trees and ending with inner
part of pressed liquid Add an article
the inner
chocolate
.
At the beginning of the process
, cacao trees are planted in either S. America, Africa or Indonesia, after which they are harvested and emptied out the white cocoa beans
inside. Subsequently
, the beans
are fermented by being sandwiched between banana leaves, before being spread in the sun to dry. Then
, the cocoa beans
are put in large bags and weighed before being transported by either trains or lorry to a factory.
The process
continues with taking to the factory, the beans
are roasted at 350 degrees Celsius. The roasted beans
then
go through a machine where the outer shell is separated and dumped, while
the beans
themselves are crushed. At the final stage of the process
, this
inner part of the beans
is squeezed into pressed liquid chocolate
and ready to be used in various chocolate
products.Submitted by phuongdong.nguyentran on
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