The diagram above shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram above shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture describes the
process
of producing
chocolate
.
Overall
, the
process
comprises ten steps, beginning with the growing of the cacao trees and ending with
inner
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part of pressed liquid
chocolate
. At the beginning of the
process
, cacao trees are planted in either S. America, Africa or Indonesia, after which they are harvested and emptied out the white cocoa
beans
inside.
Subsequently
, the
beans
are fermented by being sandwiched between banana leaves, before being spread in the sun to dry.
Then
, the cocoa
beans
are put in large bags and weighed before being transported by either trains or lorry to a factory. The
process
continues with taking to the factory, the
beans
are roasted at 350 degrees Celsius. The roasted
beans
then
go through a machine where the outer shell is separated and dumped,
while
the
beans
themselves are crushed. At the final stage of the
process
,
this
inner part of the
beans
is squeezed into pressed liquid
chocolate
and ready to be used in various
chocolate
products.
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