The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in  Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
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The line graph depicts how many kinds of three different crimes namely Burglary,
Car
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theft
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and
Robbery
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appeared in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
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,
car
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theft
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and
robbery
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stayed almost unchanged during the year,
whereas
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Burglary decreased.
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, the
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of
incidents
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that occurred in
car
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Theft
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was higher than
Robbery
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. The 2003-2012 period experienced a stay in the
number
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of
incidents
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in
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Robbery
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of about
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about
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of about
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over 500. Opposed to
Car
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theft
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, the
number
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of
incidents
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that occurred in
car
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Theft
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decreased slightly from over 2500 to about 2000 between 2003 and 2006.
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,
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figure witnessed
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leverage from about 2500 to 2012. Between 2003 and 2008, there was a significant fall in the
number
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of
incidents
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by Burglary from 3500 to around 1200
then
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it witnessed a remained stable of around 1500 during the following 7 years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, theft, robbery, number, incidents with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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