The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
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The line graph depicts how many kinds of three different crimes namely Burglary,
Car
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theft
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Robbery
appeared in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.
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Overall
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car
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theft
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robbery
stayed almost unchanged during the year, Use synonyms
whereas
Burglary decreased. Linking Words
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number
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incidents
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car
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Theft
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The 2003-2012 period experienced a stay in the Use synonyms
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incidents
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Robbery
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over 500. Opposed to Change preposition
of about
Car
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theft
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number
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incidents
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car
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Theft
decreased slightly from over 2500 to about 2000 between 2003 and 2006. Use synonyms
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leverage from about 2500 to 2012.
Between 2003 and 2008, there was a significant fall in the Remove the article
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number
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incidents
by Burglary from 3500 to around 1200 Use synonyms
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it witnessed a remained stable of around 1500 during the following 7 years.Linking Words
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