Task 1 – Take a look at the chart below and perform the task as outlined: This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

Task 1 – Take a look at the chart below and perform the task as outlined:

This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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This
line graph illustrates the percentage of four recycled materials during a
28 year
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period in a specific country. It is notable that the recycling rate of glass containers,
aluminum
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cans, and plastics showed an upward trend between 1982 and 2010. As for the
propotion
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proportion
promotion
of paper and cardboard fluctuated during the period. The
percent
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of paper and cardboard materials that ranked top in 1982
then
rose and fell in the following eight years. In 1994, it experienced dramatic growth to 80
percent
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and steadily dropped to 70
percent
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as of 2010.
However
, after all the variety, it still
taken
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the biggest part among all materials. The second place is glass containers; the line for
this
genre is
also
inconsistent. It declined from 50
percent
to 40
percent
from 1982 to 1990, and continuously increased to 60
percent
in the end. As for aluminium cans, it surged to 45
percent
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within the
28 year
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period from 5% in
the
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1982. Plastics in
the
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last
place steadily and slightly
climb
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to 9
percent
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in 2010.
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