The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon

The flow chart illustrates the development of a species of large fist called the

selmon

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Selmon

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from

egg

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the egg

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during its life

cycle

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.

Overall

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it is clear that

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there are three distinct

stage

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illustrated in the process commencing with producing

eggs

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in the water and ending with

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the development

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of mature salmon. The first stage is when the

eggs

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are

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hidden

hiden

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hidden

under reeds and small stones in the upper river for approx 5-6

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after the

eggs

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hatched

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they will be called fry

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3-8 cm the next step

after

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this

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is that the fry will go to the lower river and stay there for approx 4 years until they grow up

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thy will be called smolt

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12-15 cm after that they will move to the open sea at

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point in the

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they will become an adult salmon

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70-76 cm and the final stage of the

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is when the adult salmon go back to the lower river in order to lay

eggs

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having completed all these steps the life

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will

then

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begin again