The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
The flow chart illustrates the development of a species of large fist called the
selmon
from Change the capitalization
Selmon
salmon
egg
during its life Add an article
the egg
cycle
.
Overall
it is clear that
there are three distinct stage
illustrated in the process commencing with producing Change to a plural noun
stages
eggs
in the water and ending with development
of mature salmon.
The first stage is when the Add an article
the development
eggs
are Correct your spelling
hidden
hiden
under reeds and small stones in the upper river for approx 5-6 Correct your spelling
hidden
month
after the Fix the agreement mistake
months
eggs
hatched
they will be called fry Wrong verb form
hatch
that is
3-8 cm the next step after
this
is that the fry will go to the lower river and stay there for approx 4 years until they grow up then
thy will be called smolt that is
12-15 cm after that they will move to the open sea at this
point in the cycle
they will become an adult salmon that is
70-76 cm and the final stage of the cycle
is when the adult salmon go back to the lower river in order to lay eggs
having completed all these steps the life cycle
will then
begin againSubmitted by s_syedy on
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