The diagram below show the lifecyle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The flow chart illustrates the development of a species of large fish called the salmon from
egg
during its life cycle.
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an egg
Overall
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it is clear that
there are three distinct stages illustrated in the process, commencing with producing eggs in the water and ending with Linking Words
development
of mature
The first Add an article
the development
stage
is when the eggs which are laid in the upper river with Use synonyms
slow moving
water hatch after approximately 5-6 months. At Add a hyphen
slow-moving
this
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stage
, small fish which is called fries emerge, and they are around 3-8 cm long. They eventually move to Use synonyms
lower
river, and they stay there for approximately four years. Add an article
the lower
This
average-size fish is called smolts, and they are around 12-15cm. The next Linking Words
steps
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step
after
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this
is when they move to Linking Words
open
sea and stay there for approximately five years. During Correct article usage
the open
this
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stage
, they gradually turn into adult salmon with around 70-76cm. The final Use synonyms
stage
is when the adult salmon go back to the upper river to lay eggs. Having completed these steps, the life cycle will Use synonyms
then
begin again.Linking Words
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