The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
Land degradation is when the value of
a
land decreases by losing Remove the article
apply
it's
ability to produce food and Replace the word
its
nutritions
. The chart Fix the agreement mistake
nutrition
represent
the reasons that contributed to it , Change the verb form
represents
While
there are various factors , we will focus on the 3 main reasons , which are deforestation , over-gazing
, And over-cultivation . including the Correct your spelling
over-grazing
precentage
that Correct your spelling
percentage
have
been caused in some regions Correct subject-verb agreement
has
such
as the United states
, Europe , And Oceania .
Capitalize word
States
Overall
, we can see that the major contribution is the
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over-gazing
, which Correct your spelling
over-grazing
had
been mostly caused by Wrong verb form
has
oceania
, Change the capitalization
Oceania
on the other
hand
Europe had a larger impact Add the comma(s)
hand,
of
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on
the
deforestation Correct article usage
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comparing
to the United States .
First of all , these three Wrong verb form
compared
contries
combined Correct your spelling
countries
represents
41% of the causes that Change the verb form
represent
genarated
the global problem . Correct your spelling
generated
generate
however
, Europe has a precentage
of 23%, which Correct your spelling
percentage
contains
mostly Verb problem
is
of
over-cultivation , Change preposition
apply
this
will have a serious affect
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effect
in
the ecosystem Change preposition
on
,
because a ton of species rely on the benefits of Remove the comma
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an
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argicultural
land . as opposed to Oceania which did not Correct your spelling
agricultural
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any Correct your spelling
generate
affect
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