The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
Land degradation is when the value of
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land decreases by losing
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ability to produce food and
nutritions
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. The chart
represent
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the reasons that contributed to it ,
While
there are various factors , we will focus on the 3 main reasons , which are deforestation ,
over-gazing
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, And over-cultivation . including the
precentage
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percentage
that
have
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been caused in some regions
such
as the United
states
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, Europe , And Oceania .
Overall
, we can see that the major contribution is
the
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over-gazing
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, which
had
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been mostly caused by
oceania
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,
on the other
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Europe had a larger impact
of
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the
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deforestation
comparing
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to the United States . First of all , these three
contries
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countries
combined
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41% of the causes that
genarated
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generated
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the global problem .
however
, Europe has a
precentage
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percentage
of 23%, which
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mostly
of
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over-cultivation ,
this
will have a serious
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in
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the ecosystem
,
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because a ton of species rely on the benefits of
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argicultural
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agricultural
land . as opposed to Oceania which did not
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generate
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regarding
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over-cultivation.
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Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • agricultural land
  • less productive
  • over-grazing
  • deforestation
  • over-cultivation
  • minor causes
  • regional impact
  • percentage affected
  • comparative analysis
  • detrimental
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