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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreighn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Speaking a foreign
language
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 move there , whether for work purposes or any other reason .
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 will discuss various aspects regarding
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and the
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 on people's life
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 level and their career .
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could cause some challenges .
however
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 and learn more about their culture . In terms of difficulties that might
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 speaker , is that they might enquire to be well-spoken and have a deep understanding
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 various subjects in a
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foreign
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 when it comes to a work setting , how ?
for example
 , someone could be highly experienced in a specific field , but unable to communicate fluently, could have the possibility to be misunderstood . One of the main advantages , it will gain them more knowledge and opportunities ,
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 they are able to relocate and speak another
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 do agree with
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speaking
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Language barrier
  • Miscommunication
  • Isolation
  • Cultural differences
  • Social norms
  • Essential services
  • Employment challenges
  • Social integration
  • Community events
  • Support systems
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