The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
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The line graph compares the usage of four transportation methods, namely road,water, rail and pipelines in the United Kingdom during a quarter decade from 1975. The figures were measured in
million
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tons
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the
overall
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usage of the rails remains unchanged,that of the three other mods was raised
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, carrying the goods by road and pipeline were recognized as the most popular and the least demanded methodologies that were used within the time respectively. When looking at the given data,in 1975, three-quarters of 100
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tons
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of items were moved via streets which
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fluctuated till 1990 and leveled off at 80
million
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tons
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for five
years
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.
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, since 1995 it witnessed a gradual increase for the next decade and reached a peak of a century of a
million
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tons
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. In the same way,hydraulic systems that started at 400 thousand
tons
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,upgraded slightly in the first 5
years
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up to 50
million
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. Simultaneously,the demand for that
remainedm
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remained
unchanged for the next 10
years
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and throughout the final five
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years
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it experienced a rapid elevation, gaining the apex of 60.
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, at the beginning
rails
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rail
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accounted for the same figure as that of the water and despite the fluctuations that occurred in the following 15
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it served at the same level up to 2000.
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, the pipelines which reported a minimum of 5
million
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tons
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,had escalated that gradually by four times in 5
years
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, they reached one-fifth of the 100
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tons
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of items were exchanged by the pipelines for the rest of the
years
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "consequently".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tons, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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