Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Pollution

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is a serious global problem

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that which is caused by traffic is one which can be tackled. I would agree that the primary way of doing

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would be to invest in the public

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infrastructure.

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, there are

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other ways.

People

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need to commute in order to travel to work

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choose to travel to work in private

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gridlock in many cities twice a day, and which

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rise to more serious problems. The fumes from these

cars

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cause air

pollution

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, resulting in poor quality, harmful air in our cities. These fumes are

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a major contributor to global warming. If

people

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used public

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instead

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of driving

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problem would be dramatically reduced. Cost and convenience are big factors in

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’s choice of

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reason

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governments need to invest money to ensure that they have a

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system which is more effective than private car ownership.

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means that the system is reliable and is capable of transporting large numbers of

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around the city cheaply and quickly. An example of a

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system is in Tokyo where millions of

people

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rely on public

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rather than driving themselves. An alternative solution to the problem is to encourage the use of electric

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. We already have the technology to produce electric

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which do not produce any fumes so do not result in air

pollution

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, these

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are not as popular at present. The government could change

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by subsidizing car ownership through perhaps offering tax deductions when purchasing the

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. They could

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offer free parking in city centres for electric

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. In conclusion, public investment in subsidized public

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infrastructure is certainly vital in order to tackle

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there are

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some other alternatives with regards to cleaner technology.

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Topic Vocabulary:

sustainable transport
carbon footprint
mass transit
subsidization
fare reduction
environmental impact
urban planning
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commuter behavior
infrastructural development
economic efficiency
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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

Some people believe that students should be required to study a broad range of subjects, while others argue that students should be allowed to specialize in a specific field from an early age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.