The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that closed and the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
that opened in a particular country from 2011 to 2018.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
closures
and Use synonyms
openings
both experienced fluctuations throughout the period. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
closures
generally increased, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
openings
showed a declining trend.
In 2011, the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
opening was significantly higher than the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
shops
closing, with approximately 8,500 Use synonyms
openings
compared to around 6,500 Use synonyms
closures
. The following year, both figures decreased, with Use synonyms
openings
dropping sharply to just under 4,000 and Use synonyms
closures
falling to 6,000.
From 2013 to 2014, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
closures
peaked at over 7,000 before declining to approximately 6,600. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of new Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
openings
saw a minor increase, reaching around 5,000 in 2013 and just over 6,000 in 2014. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
upward trend did not Linking Words
last
, as Linking Words
openings
fell again to around 4,000 in the subsequent years.
A notable change occurred in 2015 when the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
closures
dramatically dropped to just under 1,000, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of new Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
openings
remained relatively stable at around 4,000. Use synonyms
After
Linking Words
this
point, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
closures
gradually increased, reaching approximately 5,000 by 2016 and maintaining that level until 2018. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
openings
continued to decline, hitting a low point of 3,000 in 2018.
In summary, the period from 2011 to 2018 saw a general increase in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
closures
and a decrease in the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
shop
Use synonyms
openings
, with significant fluctuations in both trends.Use synonyms
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