Task 1. The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products. Write at least 150 words

Task 1. The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products. Write at least 150 words
The diagram demonstrates the
process
by which
pineapples
are grown and prepared to become products. First of all, pineapple bushes are grown
seperately
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separately
with 26
centimeter
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26-centimetre
gap between each bush. The temperature is maintained around 23-30 degrees Celsius for
pineapples
to grow properly. After growing for 7 months, these bushes are sprayed with
ethaline
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ethylene
saline
.
Then
, these pineapple bushes continue growing for 5 months until the
pineapples
’ length and weight are 30
centimeters
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and 2 kilograms respectively. The
process
continues with
pineapples
are
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being
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carefully washed to prepare for the next
process
.
Then
,
pineapples
are sorted based on their size.
First,
having cut the heads, the smallest
pineapples
are peeled to put in the extractor where the juice is extracted. In another
process
, bigger
pineapples
have their head cut, and these
pineapples
are chopped in half.
Then
, they are sliced into smaller chunks and canned.
In contrast
, covered with wax, the largest
pineapples
are put in boxes for exportation.
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