You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start `
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to thank you first for giving me a chance to work with your well-known organization JSL
accounts
as a senior accountant. Unfortunately, I cannot join the company as per the planned date of July, 1 Capitalize word
Accounts
due to
some issues. I apologize for the inconvenience due to
me.
Everything was going smoothly and I was fully prepared for joining. But last
weekend as I went out to play football with my collegemates, I got an extremely bad sprain on my ankle. As it gave me a lot of pain so, I rushed to the hospital and after proper care and treatment, my doctor advised me not to walk for 10 days. This
is the reason why I cannot join on the planned date however
; I can join 15 days after the pre-planned date.
If I join on July 15, I promise, I will work with full dedication and I will not give you any chance of complaint. I hope you understand my dire circumstances.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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Consider adding more specific details about how the work delay might be handled during your absence to show proactive problem-solving.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea, but avoid overly complex structures.
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The tone is professional and courteous, appropriate for a letter to an employer.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, main body, and conclusion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite