The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps below depict the current layout of
central
area of Islip, a small town and proposed development plans for the future.
Add an article
the central
It is clear that
the residential and recreational area will see dramatic developments as a number of shops
were
Wrong verb form
are
demolsished
, a new road will be constructed and many houses will be built.
With regard to recreational facilities, the row of Correct your spelling
demolished
shops
which is situated in the north of the town will be completely destroyed and a new bus station, shopping center
, car park and new housing will be set up in that location. Change the spelling
centre
On the other hand
, the shops
which stands
to the south of the main road will not Change the verb form
stand
changed
.
Considering Change the verb form
change
be changed
residential
area, a new housing will be constructed to the south of the Add an article
the residential
shops
. In addition
, the car park in the southwest of the town will be rebuilt to reduce its size. Also
, where the pedestrisation
stands, there used to be a main road. Correct your spelling
pedestrianisation
predestination
Finally
, the dual carriageway will be built around the center
.Change the spelling
centre
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