The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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The maps illustrate the current nucleus of a little municipality and the strategy for its advancement. It is clearly observed that new residential and recreational areas will be constructed and
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a new road will be built. Looking at the first
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, there is a long main road in the centre of the
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which joins the east of
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Islip town to the west. The second
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shows the main road will be replaced with pedestrians only.
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, the rows of shops in the north of the current city will be converted into a bus station, car park and new housing
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a new shopping centre will be constructed. In the second
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map
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there will be planned to build a dual carriageway to reduce traffic congestion.
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, in the Islip town now, there is a housing in the south of the shops that will be expanded by a new housing. The park will be rebuilt to reduce its size
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, the location of the school remained unchanged

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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