The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015.

The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015.
The given bar chart illustrates the rate of
investment
on
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different types of clean
energy
, like solar,
wind
,
energy
smart technologies and 'other'
energy
in
uk
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UK
within a period of 8
years
, commencing from 2008.
Overall
, the highest rate of
investment
can be observed for
wind
in 2015
while
the opposite can be seen for
energy
smart technologies in 2008. solar and
wind
energy
were significantly greater than that of other categories.
According to
the
digram
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, at the beginning of the period, the
investment
for
wind
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the wind
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was around 2bn in 2008,
this
figure increased moderately within 2
years
to get to over 5bn.
this
number keeps fluctuating over the period to
finsh
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finish
over 10bn. solar
energy
had the same amount of
investment
in four different
years
. the majority of people interested in
spend
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money
for
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wind
energy
over the
years
while
the minority can be considered for
energy
smart technologies. the more noticeable feature is that people do not have
intersted
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interest
in
investment
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for
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solar
energy
in 2008 and 2009.
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