Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. เริ่ม 12:40
It is believed by some people that reducing the speed of
vehicles
will affect Use synonyms
the
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apply
road
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safety
in a positive way. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, there could be other ways to upgrade Linking Words
road
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safety
which Use synonyms
includes
having Correct subject-verb agreement
include
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seperate
roads for different types of Correct your spelling
separate
vehicles
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or
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apply
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seperate
walking paths for pedestrians or improving public transportation. Correct your spelling
separate
This
essay will discuss both sides and provide its opinion.
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Road
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safety
is considered an important aspect in Use synonyms
western
regions. The best way these countries tackle Capitalize word
Western
with
Change preposition
apply
this
is to reduce the maximum speed of the Linking Words
vehicles
. Use synonyms
For instance
, the maximum speed in Toronto was reduced from 50 to 30 Linking Words
kilometers
per hour in the city Change the spelling
kilometres
due to
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the
traffic and pedestrian Correct article usage
apply
safety
. Use synonyms
This
helped in reducing Linking Words
road
accidents in that area and Use synonyms
also
the city Linking Words
do
not deal with Change the verb form
does
road
incidents Use synonyms
that
often Correct word choice
as
than
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as
they
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it
use
to in the past. Wrong verb form
used
Moreover
, the velocity of the Linking Words
vehicles
should be set Use synonyms
according to
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person's
ability to control based on the Correct article usage
a person's
hinderences
.
But there are Correct your spelling
hindrances
also
other ways in which Linking Words
the
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apply
road
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safety
can be taken care of, without limiting the Use synonyms
accelaration
. Having Correct your spelling
acceleration
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seperate
paths for different bikes, motorbikes, pedestrians and cars would help in limiting or reducing the number of accidents on roads. Correct your spelling
separate
For example
, in Germany, there are auto Linking Words
bahns
in which there is no speed limit for the Correct your spelling
barns
bans
vehicles
who travel on it because there are Use synonyms
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seperate
lanes being divided Correct your spelling
separate
according to
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speed
of cars or trucks and those who Add an article
the speed
a speed
wants
to drive Change the verb form
want
slow
should be on the right lane. Change the word
slowly
Furthermore
, it is seen that where public transportation is better, individuals do not like to travel Linking Words
seperately
and there is lot less traffic on the streets than usual and they automatically becomes Correct your spelling
separately
more safe
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safer
due to
that. Linking Words
This
approach should be used Linking Words
than
to decrease Correct word choice
apply
limit
as transportation is a means to reach Fix the agreement mistake
limits
at
a specific place in time and they cannot reach in time with less velocity.
Change preposition
apply
To conclude
, There are many ways to tackle Linking Words
the
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apply
road
incidents and should be considered by the government as implying a certain provision can have Use synonyms
adverse
Add an article
an adverse
affect
on the public Replace the word
effect
along with
some positive Linking Words
aspect
. So, Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
State
should always look for means that do Correct article usage
the State
mimimum impairement
.Correct your spelling
minimum impairment
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