You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph compares the number of thefts per thousand cars in various countries during the
years
1990 and 1999. Overall
, all of the four countries faced volatility of car robbery throughout the years
, however
during the last
few years
Great Britain and France experienced a declining rate while
Canada
and Sweden
faced a rising rate.
In 1990, Great Britain was the country with the highest robbery rate, reported with
almost 20 thefts, a stark contrast to France with a little over 5 thefts. Wrong verb form
reporting
However
, around the year 1996, either started to see a reduced number of robberies, that
keeps lowering to a little above 15 for Great Britain and to just over 5 for France after previously Correct pronoun usage
which
experienced
its highest at almost 10.
Wrong verb form
experiencing
On the other hand
, in Canada
and Sweden
the events of car stealing keep increasing during the Add a comma
Sweden,
last
four years
. Sweden
begun
with almost 10 and Add the auxiliary verb
began
Canada
a little lower in 1990, then
Sweden
rose to almost 15, while
Canada
returned at
slightly above 5 in 1990 after Change preposition
to
experienced
a decrease in 1993 to around 5.Wrong verb form
experiencing
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, canada, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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