The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the number of thefts per thousand cars in various countries during the
years
1990 and 1999. Use synonyms
Overall
, all of the four countries faced volatility of car robbery throughout the Linking Words
years
, Use synonyms
however
during the Linking Words
last
few Linking Words
years
Great Britain and France experienced a declining rate Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Canada
and Use synonyms
Sweden
faced a rising rate.
In 1990, Great Britain was the country with the highest robbery rate, Use synonyms
reported with
almost 20 thefts, a stark contrast to France with a little over 5 thefts. Wrong verb form
reporting
However
, around the year 1996, either started to see a reduced number of robberies, Linking Words
that
keeps lowering to a little above 15 for Great Britain and to just over 5 for France after previously Correct pronoun usage
which
experienced
its highest at almost 10.
Wrong verb form
experiencing
On the other hand
, in Linking Words
Canada
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Sweden
the events of car stealing keep increasing during the Add a comma
Sweden,
last
four Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
Sweden
Use synonyms
begun
with almost 10 and Add the auxiliary verb
began
Canada
a little lower in 1990, Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
Sweden
rose to almost 15, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Canada
returned Use synonyms
at
slightly above 5 in 1990 after Change preposition
to
experienced
a decrease in 1993 to around 5.Wrong verb form
experiencing
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, canada, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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