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The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
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The bar chart depicts how many visitors selected three airports, namely
J
.
F
.
Kennedy
, La
Guardia
 and
Newark
 in New York City over a 5-year timescale starting from 1995 to 2000. Broadly,
while
 the number of tourists of La
Guardia
,
Newark
 exhibited consistent upward trajectories, that of
J
.
F
.
Kennedy
 witnessed a completely opposite pattern throughout the entire duration. La
Guardia
, notably, was by far the most widespread
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visitors
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 in its airports. From the outset in 1995, the figure of passengers of La
Guardia
 was the highest, accounting for roughly 35
millions
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, which was in the region of 10
millions
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 higher than that of
J
.
F
.
Kennedy
.
Thereafter
,
while
 the number of
travelers
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 choosing LaGuardia experienced a rapid increase, peaking at close to 68
millions
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million
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, that of
J
.
F
.
Kennedy
 registered a significant rise to about 48
millions
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million
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 until the year 1997 and a slight decline to approximately 33
millions
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 in the year 1999. Fortunately, the number of visitors selected
J.
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F
.
Kennedy
 gathered pace and made a recovery to around 45
millions
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million
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 in 2000. Commencing from 1995, approximately 15
millions
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million
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of
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passengers
show
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 their interest in
Newark
, hitting the lowest point in the initial year, after which it witnessed a
sharly
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sharp
 rise to around 38
millions
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million
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 in 1997. During the following 3 years from 1998 to 2000, there was a stable trend in the data of tourists using
Newark
, remaining steady
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at
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to
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 40
millions
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million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words j, f, kennedy, guardia, newark, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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