Some people think the the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, instead of benefiting them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people

argued

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that the main aim of

schools

is to turn pupils into good people and workers ,

instead

of helping them as individuals . I strongly believe that the main

purose

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purpose

of

schools

are

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to provide all sorts of help to build their career of choice rather than focus on developing them as good

citizen

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citizens

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which I believe

responsibilities

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responsibility

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of

parents

.

To begin

with ,

schools

play a vital

role

in

a

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the

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growth of

childrens

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children

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.

In other words

,

schools

enroll

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enrol

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children

in various activities so that find out their inner talent and

develope

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develop

their skill set in it .

For example

, all

children

have their own speciality and the

role

of the teachers

are

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is

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to enhance the productivity inside

kidz

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by improving their

weakness

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weaknesses

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and

direct

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directing them

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to

right

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the right

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path for their career goals

such

as

child

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a child

the child

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who

like

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likes

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to participate in a

sport

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activity

then

it is

responsibility

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the responsibility

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of school

sport

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teacher to provide all kind of help that child needs. On

other

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the other

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hand,

parents

play

very

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essential

role

to turn

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in turning

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their

kids

to

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into

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better citizens .

In other words

, it all depends on

children

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children's

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environment at home .If

children

brought

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are brought

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up by watching their

parents

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parent's

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positive behavior

then

most likely those

kids

naturally

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are naturally

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good citizens .

Also

,

punchuality

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punctuality

and time management are the basic skills that most

of

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apply

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kids

learn from their

parents

and these manners will apply

at

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in

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workplace

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the workplace

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environment too .

For example

,

children

who

lives

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live

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in bad conditions

such

as one of the

parent

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parents

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makes money

illegaly

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illegally

then

kid most likely to follow

same

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the same

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path in the future . In conclusion , some

states

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that the main aim of the

schools

are

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is

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to teach

kids

to become good

citizen

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citizens

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and workers

instead

of benefiting them as individuals .

However

, I believe

parents

are

role

models for

kids

to make them good citizens and

schools

should enhance the

indvidual

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individual

personality of

kids

.