the bar chart below shows the percentage of unemplyoyed graduatess, aged 20-24, in one European country over a twoo-year period

The diagram below delineates the

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of students who were unemployed after

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from 2008 to 2009

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, out of all the dates, October 2009 had the highest

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graduates for both

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alike. One thing to note was that there

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unemployment

from 2008 to 2009. Looking at the table, in 2008 there were a few noticeable features. Out of all 4 months in the graph, men were always higher than women in

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of

unemployment

. Interestingly, both months April and July had almost the same

percentage

at 7

percent

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and 2

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.

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in October, the percentages had a massive surge with 16

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for

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and 11

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for

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.

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to 2008, in 2009 there

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an obvious increase

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since January with 12

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of

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and 8

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of

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. In April 2009,

while

the men

percentage

stayed similar to the first month, the

percentage

of women dropped dramatically to only 6

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. 2009

unemployment

graduates peaked in October with

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unemployment

percentage

at 22

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and

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at 14

percent

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.