The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps depict an industrial space in Norbiton city
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and the future development plan of the site in the future.
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, it can be seen that, all of the current infrastructure which is mostly used as factories will replaced by some new facilities and infrastructures. The other noticeable fact is only the roundabout will still same after the development plan of the city.
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of the street from the roundabout on the east side, there will be a new school building, where Factory Buildings alongside the street will be demolished to build housing and a playground area on the north of the street.
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, the empty field in the southeast of the roundabout will be used to build a medical centre. Turning to the other facilities, Factories in the west-south of the roundabout will be knocked down to make a shop,
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the factory space in the northwest will replaced by housing, connected by a new paved.
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, housing will installed in some areas of farmland
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the north of the town, where a new bridge under the river will erected to connect
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new facility to the public infrastructure.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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